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I done this page for the Comistock Contest (comic portion).
The purpose was to use some stock made for this contest to make a comic or cartoon deviation.
I made no choice: I use all three stock images! By re-reading the rules, I realized that the first used photo was actually a landing... Bah, it works well also the way I used it.
I used for this page my character, Ania ji Gon, the Half dragon which I started to develop a bit more.
The scenario isn't a complex one, and the punchline is rather lame, but the story wasn't the main purpose of this contest entry...

It is far from perfect, the perspectives of the backgrounds are so-so, particularly in the last frame. And the middle frames are a bit empty: I planned to add speed lines, then I though it would be too much. What do you think?

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J'ai fait cette page pour un concours rassemblant personnes faisant des photos de stock (références) et dessinateurs de BD et dessins humoristiques.
Le but était d'utiliser quelques références faites pour ce concours pour faire une page de BD ou un dessin.
Je n'ai pas fait de choix : j'ai utilisé les trois images de référence ! En relisant les règles, j'ai réalisé que la première photo utilisée était en fait un atterrissage... Bah, it fonctionne pas mal comme ça aussi.
J'ai utilisé pour cette page mon personnage, Ania ji Gon, la demi-dragonne que j'ai commencé à développer un peu plus.
Le scénario n'est pas complexe, et la chute est assez bébette, mais l'histoire n'est pas le but principal de cette entrée de concours.

C'est loin d'être parfait, les perspectives des décors sont un peu bancales, particulièrement dans la dernière case. Et les cases du milieu sont assez vide : je pensais au début mettre des lignes de vitesse, mais j'ai pensé que cela ferait trop. Qu'en pensez-vous ?

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:bulletpurple: Date: 2008-04
:bulletpurple: Tools/Outils/Media: India ink with brush on paper / Encre de Chine avec pinceau sur papier
:bulletpurple: Format: A3 (29.7 x 42 cm)
:bulletred: Stock images © *Della-Stock, *SenshiStock, *Spiteful-Pie-Stock -- See the news article for the original images.
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CarloValente Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
it's a good work, anatomy it's hard... i know it (i draw only animals....) :)
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philho Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, I struggle to improve in this field: my characters are often too stiff and sometime out of proportion.
Using good references like for this contest helps a lot.
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Shin-Senpuu Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2008
Maybe speed lines are too much, but you can give the girl some movement lines, like some curved lines near the elbow to the hand that show her doing an uppercut, and some curve lines too near the feet at the kicking panel. Err... I have difficulty explaining these, I hope you understand what I mean... ^^; And good luck with the contest! :D
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philho Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, speed lines is more of manga style while the movement lines are more "comic". Good idea, thanks.
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Shin-Senpuu Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008
Glad that I can help. :)
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Damaged927 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice use of the poses that you were given and I like the "punch" line :giggle: Sorry, I couldn't resist :XD:
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philho Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, thanks.
I hope this page is punchy enough.
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